[Discussions] SOTM#38 - March 2016

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Discussion Thread:

You may post your questions, inquiries and suggestions here.
You may also critique and comment with the artworks here.
(You may submit your artworks in the SOTM#38 entry section.^^)


Winner shall receive a trophy from the forum's award system.
(So yeah, you also have to get the bragging rights.)


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Well, so far I did 2 versions made (I'll probably also an 3rd make, but who knows...)...
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I'll probably the 1st take, but I just wanna some pre-opinions of you hear...
 
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Well, so far I did 2 versions made (I'll probably also an 3rd make, but who knows...)...
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I'll probably the 1st take, but I just wanna some pre-opinions of you hear...

Hmm,looks nice but I think you can change some stuff...looks so messed up to my eyes ;-;
 
which messed up parts/elements...?

If I were to choose the best from the two,I'd go with the first one.But I'd change style of the corners and the color it has(instead of strong red to a softer warm color like pink),as for the background image I think it looks nice but girl with the weapon doesn't fit the image(not meant by size,as the harmony of the theme),the sakura looks nice and the temple looks kinda odd but I guess you putted it because it reflects the japanese spring holiday/festival...
 
Oh also,very brilliant theme for this month [MENTION=44312]Dark Angel[/MENTION]; ! I've already started making my entry for this one! :)
 
If I were to choose the best from the two,I'd go with the first one.But I'd change style of the corners and the color it has(instead of strong red to a softer warm color like pink),as for the background image I think it looks nice but girl with the weapon doesn't fit the image(not meant by size,as the harmony of the theme),the sakura looks nice and the temple looks kinda odd but I guess you putted it because it reflects the japanese spring holiday/festival...
i believe the background needs some changes. otherwise i would pick the 1st.
Well, me was clear that the first concept win would as my entry for this contest, just I needed an confirmation for the first - the second was more or less experimentally.

And K-chan, I did directly the gate given: Because who Ara Han (the girl) knows, then he or she knows the relation between them. This is her human shape, but she can partly in her kitsune (fox) transform - And now coming the relationship to the gate: Well, you (also your guess about it is right) know that at Japan's folklore even foxes divine venerated will, and for this gives it even a Shinto-shrine for them, the Inari-shrine better said. And to the shrine (on the way there) gives it several of these aka no mon (red gates).
 
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Well, me was clear that the first concept win would as my entry for this contest, just I needed an confirmation for the first - the second was more or less experimentally.

And K-chan, I did directly the gate given: Because who Ara Han (the girl) knows, then he or she knows the relation between them. This is her human shape, but she can partly in her kitsune (fox) transform - And now coming the relationship to the gate: Well, you (also your guess about it is right) know that at Japan's folklore even foxes divine venerated will, and for this gives it even a Shinto-shrine for them, the Inari-shrine better said. And to the shrine (on the way there) gives it several of these aka no mon (red gates).

I believe to add as an element more sakura trees or leaves whatever is more easy for you i believe it will work very nice and you will have a nice harmony with your render.
 
I believe to add as an element more sakura trees or leaves whatever is more easy for you i believe it will work very nice and you will have a nice harmony with your render.
Hmm... To which concept do saying you it...?
 
The first sig that you have uploaded in spoiler.
Ah so, that... Well, I just wanted avoid with sakura trees/leaves to overload, I'm trying with the elements in balance to hold - None should be too dominant...
 
And K-chan, I did directly the gate given: Because who Ara Han (the girl) knows, then he or she knows the relation between them. This is her human shape, but she can partly in her kitsune (fox) transform - And now coming the relationship to the gate: Well, you (also your guess about it is right) know that at Japan's folklore even foxes divine venerated will, and for this gives it even a Shinto-shrine for them, the Inari-shrine better said. And to the shrine (on the way there) gives it several of these aka no mon (red gates).

But what does it do with the theme?I mean,the way she can turn into a fox etc.Beside of people who knew about this info,the other people like me who didn't knew would think the way I did,so my advice is while making your entry focus on the theme better so that will catch voters eyes :3For example,since you used the big mountain at the background,you can put a girl with kimono as a render with textures as sakura petals on her back^^

I think you can do much more better since your current signature itself*not sotm entry* has a great harmony with the character!Ganbatte Shi :bigeyes:
 
[MENTION=29193]nanashi1[/MENTION]; [MENTION=44312]Dark Angel[/MENTION];

My entry looks like this,but it's still in progress :)
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Well, I did with the first concept with 3 other charas played, I'll these 3 then tomorrow show...:bored:
 
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[MENTION=29193]nanashi1[/MENTION]; I'm looking forward to see my dear~!
 
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