Tralalalala~

[Kyubikokage]

Okay, so, last night I drew a cute little chibi of ケイミ一 (Keimei) who is a mermaid from an anime called One Piece (for those of you who don't know). I'm really super proud of her, the only irritation I have are those stupid pencil marks!



Please give me your thoughts~! (If you're mean, I'll hunt you down and slap you silly with a piece of bacon!)

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

The head is oddly wide and she has no chin =/ Do i get bacon now? xD

 

[Kyubikokage]

The head is oddly wide and she has no chin =/ Do i get bacon now? xD

Hey, come on, don't you think you went a little too far? I did say she was a chibi.... I don't really want to post my Luffy thing now...

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

So youre not going to chase meh with bacon =/ It wasnt really serious though =w=

Hmm... fairly sure whatever else is sort of personal preference anyhow =w= But fine ill give a somewhat more serious comment... :/ Im somewhat of a perfectionist though... but ill leave that stuff for you to find on your own i guess...

Cutesy and the inking is decent~ It might be nicer to have thinner markers if you can, though thick ones have their uses x3 Try testing a bit more with thick and thin lines though~ The pupil of the eyes should be changed slightly (assuming she is looking at the fish) The fish's scales are reversed?... o.o How her fin is right by her leg/tail is usually frowned upon, try overlapping or putting more space between them~ Tip 6 http://painting.about.com/od/paintingtipscomposition/a/10TipsCompositn.htm

 

[Kyubikokage]

So youre not going to chase meh with bacon =/ It wasnt really serious though =w=

Hmm... fairly sure whatever else is sort of personal preference anyhow =w= But fine ill give a somewhat more serious comment... :/ Im somewhat of a perfectionist though... but ill leave that stuff for you to find on your own i guess...

Cutesy and the inking is decent~ It might be nicer to have thinner markers if you can, though thick ones have their uses x3 Try testing a bit more with thick and thin lines though~ The pupil of the eyes should be changed slightly (assuming she is looking at the fish) The fish's scales are reversed?... o.o How her fin is right by her leg/tail is usually frowned upon, try overlapping or putting more space between them~ Tip 6 http://painting.about.com/od/paintingtipscomposition/a/10TipsCompositn.htm

See? I like this review MUCH better. And yeah, all of my inking pens ran out so I'm stuck with just a Papermate flair pen, and I'm really suffering xD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Well i guess the special pens are somewhat expensive after all... =w= Hmm... and pencil marks... maybe draw light enough to just erase it all at the end?

 

[Kyubikokage]

Well i guess the special pens are somewhat expensive after all... =w= Hmm... and pencil marks... maybe draw light enough to just erase it all at the end?

Yeah, well, that and I always wasn't using the best eraser at that time xD it's not even the finished product after all o:

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Going to color it?

 

[Kyubikokage]

Of course! I also might scan it and color it digitally as well :3 but as of right now I'm working on drawing the crew members of the Strawhat Pirates' kana names in bubble letters with drawings that represent each of them. It'll make more sense once you see it ^^''

 

[Kyubikokage]

UUUUGGGGHHH, SHUSHIE ABOUT THE PENCIL MARKS, I JUST FORGOT TO ERASE THEM BEFORE I TOOK THE PICTURE, LEAVE ME ALONE, IT'S 1:03 AM WHERE I AM SO POTATO.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Why potato? o.o

Hmm well he pencil marks dont show up too much anyhow =w=

 

[Kyubikokage]

Why potato? o.o

Hmm well he pencil marks dont show up too much anyhow =w=

Ahahahaha, WHY NOT potato?!

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Because cows dont float =/ (has no idea what he is saying)

 

[Kyubikokage]

Because cows dont float =/ (has no idea what he is saying)

-patpatpat- is okie. so, I'd like a review for this one too, please. I serious one, I really put a lot of effort into this!

 

[Infamous]

your title reminded me of this song

UUUUGGGGHHH, SHUSHIE ABOUT THE PENCIL MARKS, I JUST FORGOT TO ERASE THEM BEFORE I TOOK THE PICTURE, LEAVE ME ALONE, IT'S 1:03 AM WHERE I AM SO POTATO.

from a glance, i really like it. the lettering being full of other images is great. looking more into it though, it makes me feel like one of the first two parts should be different images,rather then both being skulls. know what i mean?

 

[pichu655889]

Aye, that first drawing is cuuuute

 

[FinalPyre]

Get a good old 2-3H pencil, draw lightly, and your pencil line woes will be behind you for good!

 

[Kyubikokage]

your title reminded me of this song

from a glance, i really like it. the lettering being full of other images is great. looking more into it though, it makes me feel like one of the first two parts should be different images,rather then both being skulls. know what i mean?

Well, what you said were two parts is actually one character/letter, so x3

 

[Kyubikokage]

Get a good old 2-3H pencil, draw lightly, and your pencil line woes will be behind you for good!

haha, for this one, I just forgot to erase them.

 

[nanashi1]

Well, not bad - you've still the potential your skills to increase, further so...

 

[Kyubikokage]

Well, not bad - you've still the potential your skills to increase, further so...

Whatcha mean? o:

 

[nanashi1]

Whatcha mean? o:

I meant, you can sure better make than the case now is, understood? - I'm sure that your skills expand can...

 

[Kyubikokage]

I meant, you can sure better make than the case now is, understood? - I'm sure that your skills expand can...

Hmmmm~ how so?

 

[nanashi1]

Hmmmm~ how so?

Because (Positive meant...) your skill is currently still a raw diamond, where there just/only to grinding have - after is then a perfect masterpiece...


Notice: Where was my manners at first time...>_>? Hello Kyubikokage^^!

 

[Kyubikokage]

Because (Positive meant...) your skill is currently still a raw diamond, where there just/only to grinding have - after is then a perfect masterpiece...


Notice: Where was my manners at first time...>_>? Hello Kyubikokage^^!

Oh, we've met before, hehe!