Let's Create a VN!!!

[thecoins]

Hmm yes~

Spoiler: remake

 

[nanashi1]

Hmm yes~

Spoiler: remake

That is now better as the previous, Coins...~!!!

... ))) G'morning Coins, and g'day Samy...~

 

[thecoins]

Hmm morning nanashi~ well, improvement is a must

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hellos shi~

Hmm the coloring is nice... but it looks like its stretched taller or something xD Seems a bit skinny? The head doesnt match the shoulder width now...

 

[thecoins]

Hmmm the head is too big again?

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm too thin i would say?

 

[nanashi1]

I don't think so... In this case seems the head-size with the rest of body this time good to synchronize, Coins...~

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm is it? well idk seems thin to meh... the shoulders seem fine but the head should probably be wider if you were following realistic proportions...

 

[thecoins]

or the head is just too long

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Or maybe the body is long? xD

 

[nanashi1]

Perhaps the head about (max) - 10% shorter to make, but that is the maximum rating...~

Otherwise is it almost perfect

 

[thecoins]

Hmm i didn't draw the whole body. probably that's why the anatomy is quite weird

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Yeah... the elbows should probably be in there somewhere xD

 

[nanashi1]

But Coins, believe just on your draw skills...~

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm i suppose more could be done later~

 

[aexiel]

still waiting on the story...

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm... ill see if ushio did anything with what i wrote yet... xD

 

[~SnowAngel~]

sorry, i'll get to it soon x-x
(need to sleep so gnight~)

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol takes your time As long as im aware you know that theres actually something then im fine~

Goodnightys ushio~

 

[aexiel]

for now I'll just keep stabbing sam then.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

And i guess ill return the stabs~

 

[redcat]

instead of stabbing each other, why don't you too cheers ushio and help her improve the story? :3

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm he stabbed me first?

 

[~SnowAngel~]

if you have room to complain, you have room to help improve~

(i'll work on it very soon~ need to get a few things out of the way, maybe cook and then i'll focus more on it)

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol ok xD Foods... Ramen~