Let's Create a VN!!!

[thecoins]

hmmm you're right

 

[~SnowAngel~]

Hair clips are usually a similar color to a person's hair so it doesn't stand out as much.

I think it needs something~ not sure yet >.< maybe after I can add more to stuff.

---

The main story outline isn't finished yet~ it still needs some polishing and stuff. We also need to polish character bio.

Ummmmmm there will be a thread for when we start talking about the title~ for now, the outlines and bio etc should be completed first. Character art stuff would help too~ if you think something can be improved, keep working at it~ don't settle for less if you can :P

Even if we did give it a title, we should not consider it the complete title till everything else is done~ (remember when I said everything needs about the same effort? XD) What we'd think of it soon might not be the same as reading it. Having a title too long might cause people to shape things according to the title. sooooo random ideas are fine if you can't wait? the title would be what draws interested people, and a description would be what makes them read it. :P

Parents usually don't name a baby til after it's born soooo think of the vn as the same way? XD We can think of names here and there, but we won't know for sure til later~


oohh ummmmmmmm adding character idea to the forum~ (don't want to spoil XD)

 

[thecoins]

hmm that make sense, I'll think about it

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm black is too different from the blond?

Well anyhow ill be busy for the week... sorta xD Finals take studying anyhow...

 

[Decalcomania]

[MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION] ; Her eyes look a bit small. Smaller than the male protagonist's, anyways.

 

[thecoins]

hmmm really? I'm trying to make her not too childish.. I'll check it again

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm well anime like females have large eyes no matter what age they are xD Well most anyway~

 

[~SnowAngel~]

i'm not sure that she'll be wearing skirts often~ :P
people at college usually don't have a dress code (uniform). girls wouldn't wear skirts/dresses unless it's warm enough. (for here, it's been maybe around early fall and mid-spring).

Jeans aren't the only thing they could wear either~ try asking [MENTION=33148]Kasumi[/MENTION]; and [MENTION=36883]LadyBenihime[/MENTION]; about what they wear otherwise. :P (sometimes rainy, cold, snow maybe, in the fall/spring, possibly summer things too :P)
(there's also things she'd wear for dancing or music. not sure what that'll be story-wise but it's getting close XD)

I'm still in the finals~ I'll say more about clothing maybe after I'm done thinking story-wise :P

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm yeah xD Should see if its in the story first... or itll just be more random work for coins... unless he wants to draw random clothing?

 

[thecoins]

hmmm random? I'll draw her in maid costume.. xD

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm could she have longer hair? Or is that hard to draw overall? xD

 

[thecoins]

hmmm draw overall?

 

[~SnowAngel~]

longer hair would be nice~ she looks around age 22 right now x-x
18 was more like the first drawing. You could have that shorter length later on maybe, idk.
hmmm would just about the middle of her back be a good length? It might not be the same later on~ unless she changes her style alot, she would probly have it short. (lots of women keep their hair short when they get older, or if they have children).

mmmmm i'm going to work on a few things~ you're doing great [MENTION=29831]thecoins[/MENTION]; :D

 

[thecoins]

hmmm ok~ so a bit younger then?

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm would we be aiming for 18 or so?

 

[thecoins]

hmmm yeah....

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol so your other ones worked?

 

[thecoins]

which one??

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm the previous one which ushio said looked 18 or so~

 

[thecoins]

hmm i think that pic is about 14 or 13... i prefer more mature character, so i change the design

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm difference in how you see it... well i can never tell the age of anime characters so i gave up long ago ;p

 

[thecoins]

hmmm everyone has their own opinion

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm yes I likeys longish hair either way ;p

 

[thecoins]

how long???

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm didnt ushio say to around halfway down the back?