- Jan 26, 2012
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Concerning the massage scenes, my interpretation was on the third day she initially refused the massage oil but he somehow managed to use it on her with her permission. Translation was a bit wonky by this point so I was just going with the flow to be honest. Didn't really like that he had to use aphrodisiacs to win her over though. Was kinda hoping he'd just break her in slowly but the way its carried out made it feel like Aya fell to fast. Pretty sure the aphrodisiac is just a fantasy drug, I mean the MC becomes a ghost at some point and eventually returns to his body so I'm not going to question the realism. The drug does seem to be insanely addictive which is what I assumed won over Aya.
One of the few things I did like about how Aya lost to the coach was how it was presented from the MC's perspective, particularly when the coach visits Aya at their house after their agreement was over just to tempt her with the last of the aphrodisiacs he had available. After she turns him down, he throws the bottle away near the house and makes sure to tell Aya about it. The MC standing beside her as a ghost placing his full trust in her while she wordlessly walks back and forth towards the door, trying to fight against the temptation was pretty neat.
At the end of the day, the aphrodisiac kinda fucked over the plot that was built up to that point. Good character writing doesn't really mean shit if all it takes is a little bit of drugs to do them in.
The really fucked up part is that from the way you are describing the author actually may have been too realist with the despítion of her addiction. Myabe that is what is disturbing people? I know for a fact i lose my boner if i find some mindbreak/rape mangas doujins too realist sometimes.
But the part about it being from the MC POV interest me enoufgh i will keep playing xD
