Let's Create a VN!!!

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm yes... i havent had nearly enough practice

So musicians are also beta testers? xD Or should they just read along in the story thread?

 

[Decalcomania]

Hooray for me being able to play several instruments.

We all should be beta testers.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol maybe? I guess thatll sort of help with seeing if its decent work on our parts~

 

[thecoins]

hmmm that's good idea..

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm might also make more ideas?

 

[thecoins]

another drawing

Spoiler: nyaa

something is weird... i don't know what though

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm something weird~ I would say the head~ Its a bit wide at the top and maybe just too large overall? Lol no hair reaching the middle of the back after all? xD

 

[thecoins]

hmm i planned that the hair will be longer, but my hand betrays me.....
the head is too big? ok~

 

[Kasumi]

I've designed three sets of clothes so far, though I think only one is really usable. Will be uploading them in a minute.

EDIT:

Spoiler: Thoughts?

I apologise for the crap quality but I don't have a scanner and had to make do with a camera. The main character struck me as a girly kind of person so I went along the lines of stuff like this. The dress and vest-like outfits look kind of impractical and unusable but I'm just throwing them out there just in case. The one with lots of accessories was made with a summer theme in mind.

 

[thecoins]

hmm dress is unpractical for daily use indeed...
how about giving the vest long sleeve?

 

[Kasumi]

Hm, possible. Three quarter sleeve, maybe?

Haha meant the dress to be a summer dress but it became something way too sophisticated. xD

 

[thecoins]

hmm dress for special events.. dunno what though

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm dates ;p

 

[thecoins]

hmm dates? yes..

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Well girls would want to look... different... around guys they like~ And guys might do similarly...

 

[thecoins]

hmm so we need fancy costume?

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

No idea? Hmm... /me wants to add random sword fights xD

 

[thecoins]

hmmm /me bring 2H-Sword

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

2H... Hmm... Idk xD But seems that there would be some action in it...

 

[thecoins]

hmm or sone random dagger

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Would be nice if the amulet (or two amulets as it seems now) could turn into weapons and since it seems they might be able to combine... one more powerful weapon~ Maybe dual swords... those can usually be combined or something xD

 

[thecoins]

hmmm add action scenes for VN maybe?

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm well its the idea that i got from reading what ushio wrote... Her outline has lots of places to put action... although i fear that something like the Pendragon series might happen where the "real world" events get somewhat boring in comparison to the adventures in the dream world~ Though a bit of exciting events every so often should work fine ;p

 

[thecoins]

hmmm how do we make the real world not boring?

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm well in the Pendragon books it was lacking action usually... relatively minor events... compared to the random fights and whatnot that was in everything else in the adventure...