[Translations] [English][deepseek-chat-v3-0324 MTL]NTR Succubus[RJ01145528]

[Shisaye]

Overview:
One day, Eric, a villager living an ordinary life, meets a succubus named "Mira.
He meets a succubus who calls herself "Mira.
As they spend time together, they develop feelings for each other and become husband and wife.
However, the succubus needs more energy than Eric alone to survive.
So Mira proposes cuckoldry.
Mira will die if she does not receive another man's semen...
Eric learns of the "shard of life" that gives the succubus its power.
With it, he can keep Mira from being embraced by another man.
Eric's desperate adventure has begun...
When he loses in the dungeon and returns home, his wife is embraced by another man.
Every time he does this, Eric thinks to himself. What? What is this? Hell?"
I'm just not worthy of it...
A wife, whether she knows her husband is wetting his pillow or not, is going to be a stranger again tonight...
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Original Title: NTRサキュバス
Developer: Summoner Veil DLsite
Release Date: 2024-01-28
Censored: Yes
Patch Version: 1.2
For Game Version: 1.0
OS: Windows
Translator: Shisaye
Language: English [DSLR MTL]

Installation:

Spoiler

1. Please change your system locale to Japanese(Japan), or use another locale method, during extraction and play, or the game will crash.
2. Extract into the game folder and overwrite.

Translator Notes:

Spoiler

Not proofread DSLRMTL made with SLR v1.130prot18.

Changelog:
1.1 Updated the DSLR translation from prot7 to prot16.
1.2 Updated the DSLR translation to prot 18.

INFO: Only works with Version 1.0

DOWNLOAD: See attachment to download

If you experience a crash, game-breaking bug, or seriously broken text please post me a screenshot and a short description when it happened. Providing a save just before the problem occurs would drastically increase the speed of the fixing process.​

 

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[Shisaye]

I've remade the translation using my new DSLR translation engine prototype.

Edit: That prototype was a bit of a failure, I'm planning to redo this translation with a better one soon.

Edit2: Updated thread with better translation.

 

[Molaahvista]

thanks so much good sir, i've been following your translation and the translator, appreciate it a lot

btw ik this not the right place to ask but is there a way to fix the problem where the translator always mistake the announce of the female character that it translates he/him/his

 

[Shisaye]

thanks so much good sir, i've been following your translation and the translator, appreciate it a lot

btw ik this not the right place to ask but is there a way to fix the problem where the translator always mistake the announce of the female character that it translates he/him/his

The idea is to give the AI an additional context prompt that lists the characters of the game and their pronouns.
The main issue is that given how RPG Maker works, it never really sees more than a single dialogue box, which means their names aren't always used, and Japanese does not have pronouns like English does. You are supposed to know by context.

I could keep everything it translated beforehand as an assistant prompt, but the problem is that the entries in the files aren't actually in the same order as they show up in game, so that could actually really confuse the AI instead of helping it. Also the more context I give it with each attempt the more tokens the provider would charge, so that gets expensive really quick.

So basically while I can improve it in the future, I don't think I can ever fully fix it (automatically).

Edit: I made some tests with limited backlog context and the result "seems" better.
I'll implement that in the next translations.

 

[Molaahvista]

The idea is to give the AI an additional context prompt that lists the characters of the game and their pronouns.
The main issue is that given how RPG Maker works, it never really sees more than a single dialogue box, which means their names aren't always used, and Japanese does not have pronouns like English does. You are supposed to know by context.

I could keep everything it translated beforehand as an assistant prompt, but the problem is that the entries in the files aren't actually in the same order as they show up in game, so that could actually really confuse the AI instead of helping it. Also the more context I give it with each attempt the more tokens the provider would charge, so that gets expensive really quick.

So basically while I can improve it in the future, I don't think I can ever fully fix it (automatically).

Edit: I made some tests with limited backlog context and the result "seems" better.
I'll implement that in the next translations.
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sounds great, keep up your good work mate, looking forward, lmk If u accept donation, im willing to

 

[Shisaye]

sounds great, keep up your good work mate, looking forward, lmk If u accept donation, im willing to

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