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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare Thread
Heya!
Ready for a book, Brothers? 'Cause it's time to delve into Married Life!
p.s. Only seven more days 'til Valentines Day! and you can't spell Valentine without NT--wait, DAMNIT! -_-
Heya!
Ready for a book, Brothers? 'Cause it's time to delve into Married Life!
Oda-san: Dudes, he's such a spaz you can't help but feel sorry of him and like the guy a little. He starts off coming across a bit like a tool because of how he acts around his wife and daughter(he's jealous of a four-year old friend his daughter makes, he's not too caring or considerate to his wife), but you quickly come to see that they're literally all he has, and in his way he thinks he's being a dutiful husband by working hard. He gets jealous easily of the things they do because he's not around them as much. His job is stressful, he gets random projects and other difficult stuff dumped on him, and he often works overtime.
Also, towards the beginning of the game he finds out he won't be getting his usual bonus, and is taking a pay cut.(Pretty sure they said this was do to the bad economy or something and was business-wide.) He has next to no bedroom technique, and his idea of good sex for both him and his wife, is for him to blow his load and fall asleep. Also, he's got like ED or something, and can't seem to get it up for his wife very well. From what I could tell, this is partially stress related and partially psychological. It basically feeds on itself in a cycle, i.e. he can't get it up 'cause he's stressed and that makes him ever more stressed. Also, their lovemaking has been pretty non-existent since his daughter was born. When they try something different or he can gather up some confidence, he does a little better, though he's nothing compared to the other men who wanna fuck his wife in terms of size, skill, or stamina.
Granted, after he starts to realize this, he does start making an effort to change, but even then it's kind of
half-assed, though this isn't entirely his fault. An important part of the story is how he sees his wife as
a spouse and a lover. He can get it up for a young call girl who's praising him and being more forward, but he
has a hard time with the normal sex he has with his wife, even though that's mostly his own fault. >_>
It could be argued that he's pretty dumb to not see the signs that his wife is cheating. When he does finally
start to realize what happening, it's pretty late in the game, and even then most of it is just having doubts in
his mind and feeling anxiety.
It could also be argued that most of his problems could have been resolved by putting in more effort and actually talking openly about their situation with his wife, but hell, if he was smarter and did those things, we wouldn't have a story. Poor dumb bastard.
Also, towards the beginning of the game he finds out he won't be getting his usual bonus, and is taking a pay cut.(Pretty sure they said this was do to the bad economy or something and was business-wide.) He has next to no bedroom technique, and his idea of good sex for both him and his wife, is for him to blow his load and fall asleep. Also, he's got like ED or something, and can't seem to get it up for his wife very well. From what I could tell, this is partially stress related and partially psychological. It basically feeds on itself in a cycle, i.e. he can't get it up 'cause he's stressed and that makes him ever more stressed. Also, their lovemaking has been pretty non-existent since his daughter was born. When they try something different or he can gather up some confidence, he does a little better, though he's nothing compared to the other men who wanna fuck his wife in terms of size, skill, or stamina.
Granted, after he starts to realize this, he does start making an effort to change, but even then it's kind of
half-assed, though this isn't entirely his fault. An important part of the story is how he sees his wife as
a spouse and a lover. He can get it up for a young call girl who's praising him and being more forward, but he
has a hard time with the normal sex he has with his wife, even though that's mostly his own fault. >_>
It could be argued that he's pretty dumb to not see the signs that his wife is cheating. When he does finally
start to realize what happening, it's pretty late in the game, and even then most of it is just having doubts in
his mind and feeling anxiety.
It could also be argued that most of his problems could have been resolved by putting in more effort and actually talking openly about their situation with his wife, but hell, if he was smarter and did those things, we wouldn't have a story. Poor dumb bastard.
The games starts with an introduction to his family and work, then that night Yoko and the profag are talking about trying to have another child. He stopped being intimate with his wife after Hinata was born. He wants to have another baby but he's worried he might not be able
to get it up. He can't manage to get hard that night.
The next night she's giving him a bj and he asks if he can go in her mouth, to which she wants to know how that's gonna make a baby. He thinks it'd be fun, but she says that that's gross and asks if he's a pervert. He's looking for something to turn him on again, but won't tell her that. They proceed to have regular sex, but he can't enjoy it and feels like something is wrong. He wonders if it's his fault for not having enough energy. He can't seem to get excited about his wife.
They're having some pillow talk and she mentions that Otsuka, the grandfather of Hinata's new friend Taro, said something about her being beautiful. The profag overreacts.
Things start to progress and the pay cut thing happens, so the wife says she could maybe get a part-time during the mornings. This is a blow to his ego as the family breadwinner. Also, she wants to work at the older guy's candy shop. The two are becoming closer since Hinata and Taro made friends at pre-school, and she's talking to Otsuka a lot. The husband doesn't think it's a good idea, and is jealous of all the time she's spending with another guy, he even claims he's trying to target her. She says he's overreacting and that she wants
someone she can talk to since she's often alone with Hinata.
The profag is at work when he gets an e-mail that Hinata has gotten in an accident. Didn't get the details, but apparently Otsaka hurt himself rescuing/helping her and Yoko has agreed to work at his shop while he recovers to show her appreciation. Profag reluctantly agrees 'cause it's like the honorable thing to do? More like honorable way to let some old man move in on your wife, amirite? -_-
This is when the old man begins to seduce her. Profag thinks he might be able to do it that night, but Yoko turns him down with a weak excuse.
The first clue that something's wrong(And where I really started paying attention. It's bad, but I'm not too diligent translating eveything until something happens to really suck me in.) is when Hinata tells him that Yoko asked her to keep a secret from him. Apparently, she was late picking her up from pre-school. Profag thinks this is weird and asks Yoko about it. She embarrassingly tell him that she fell asleep during the day when she was really fooling around with Otsuka. This confuses him because he thought she was supposed to be working that day. She assures him she had the day off. /cue mystery music. They do do it that night, but rather than keep trying for a baby, he doesn't cum inside due to worrying about money now.
The next day Yoko calls him and says that Otsuka is sick and she's going to stay over at his house with Hinata
to take care of him. Cure giant neon warning signs for all of us. Profag is upset about this, but less from an 'I'm
concerned' point and more from a whiny 'But you're my wife, why are you taking care of that guy when you should be at home cooking me dinner?'
Profag is lonely at home that night and the next day decides to walk down to where the park and candy shop are to check on them when she doesn't answer her phone. He finds Hinata and Taro playing with each other outside, but Yoko and Otsuka are no where to be seen. He calls her again, and when she comes out of the house, her hair is wet and pinned up, and she's embarrassed about something. He starts getting mad because she left a pair of four-year olds running around outside unsupervised, then Otsuka comes out all smiling and like, "'Sup, Bro?" while our profag is like, "Go eat a dick, Old Man!"
Also around here, Yoko tries giving the profag a bj and since he manages to get it up, he's ready for penetration
since he thinks that's all sex is. Yoko suggests maybe he could try to go down on her, and he freaks out and thinks that's gross, kind of a reverse situation from earlier. Also, since he's managed to get hard, he says that having sex will feel better for both of them. She blows up at this point and I was pleasantly surprised. Shocked silence follows then he actually has the gall to ask her what's wrong with her tonight because she usually likes it, and she starts screaming at him that's she's never really felt good doing it with him and that she's never came once. Extreme shocked silence. Yoko asks the profag if he even looks at her as a woman anymore, but he doesn't really answer. Instead of saying more, they both decide to go to bed upset.
The next morning the two of them aren't speaking, and even though he gets done with work early for a change,
he can't bring himself to go home in the state he's in. He goes to kill time at a restaurant and sees his manager
there. They have a conversation where the manager tries to act like the Obi-Wan Kenobi of office chiefs and gives him the most Japanese explanation for what's happening ever.
I forgot to take notes during this Icause I was reading and waiting for some big reveal or revelation, but I remember thinking that in the whole spiel, it seemed long at the time, there was was like two pieces of bad advice for every one piece of good advice. Stuff about how the both of them are getting older, and their needs are changing. That Yoko is a mother now and has responsibilities that make it hard for her to be a good lover, and that his duty is to focus on work and be a good provider and employee. The problem the profag is having according to the manager is that he's not ready to accept this and understand that their newlywed lovers style of life is over. He'll be happier once he comes to term with the fact that mostly they're relationship will be more and more sexless, and that if the profag just needs to let off some stress, then that's what call girls are for. I should note that this is a pretty widely accepted notion in Japan, which is why you see crazy shit like married couple sleepibf in two different beds, or sometimes even different rooms.
The manager also says that the reason his wife is unhappy about their sex life is because the profag is a selfish
asshole. He only cares about himself in sex and other things. This is another accepted notion in Japanese life, the man is number one and the wife is a servant who should rear kids, cook dinner, and perform her nightly duties when called upon. -_- Now I'm not saying everyone other culture doesn't have problems as well, but yeah, Japan's pretty fucked up like that.
The best thing the profag can do for everyone is try to appreciate his wife more, do the best he can(read: not much) to please her, and then pick up some tail on the side.
During this conversation the profag sways back and forth from 'Hey, he's right!' to 'I don't know...' You get the
feeling he wants to try harder, and I was thinking he was going to try to talk to Yoko when he got home...
Instead, his dumb ass sees that she's still upset and decides not to say anything. -_-
The next day, the manager takes him out from work early and introduces him to a hooker with a heart of gold, Kaori. Seriously. She takes him to a hotel and after talking a bit about his problems: the lack of excitement, stress, not being about to perform. He wants to see if he's really in as bad a shape as his manager says he is. She gets naked and he manages to pop one just looking at her. Can't remember how the wording went, but his justification is because she's young and beautiful(Though personally, I found Yoko to be more attractive and everyone who talks about his wife describes her as amazing looking and I'm pretty sure she's in her mid to late
twenties. >_> Derp.) but I think it's more or less implied it's because he can see this woman in a sexual light
whereas he sees Yoko as a wife and mother first.
He also justifies sleeping with her because it's ultimately for the sake of his wife and their happiness. :/ And we
all know that the road to being NTRed is paved with good intentions. xD So, he's amazed by how different things are and gets some new resolve to be a better man thanks to Kaori's encouragement. There's a nice bit where they talk to each other and she explains that she can really see that he loves Yoko, etc.
He's able to get it up for Yoko and is proud of himself, he also fingers her and tries to help her enjoy herself
before passing out. We get the impression that Yoko seems pleased but is actually disappointed that he can't do more though our profag remains oblivious. This also results in one of the most adorably pathetic lines ever, 'I got a boner from my wife! Go me!' @_@
Unfortunately, he doesn't manage to keep it up for long and a few days later he's back in a slump. He decides to
meet with Kaori again to see if it's really something wrong with him or something else. He manages to pop one, but this time doesn't want to do it with her, as he's feeling bad for his wife. She manages to convince him by saying she likes him and offering it for free, but even then they only do it between the thighs. When they're leaving, they run into the manager, who then proceeds to start pawing at Kaori and she acts slutty towards him.
This leaves the profag in a lot of doubt as to whether anything she said was true, or if she was just acting, but
ultimately he decides it doesn't matter since he's going to focus on Yoko, swearing he won't turn into a guy like the manager.
He comes home from work the next day to find a packaged meal waiting for him. Yoko has been 'sick' and couldn't make dinner. He tells her not to worry and that he'll help around the house and with Hinata, which makes Yoko start crying for some mysterious reason.
The next day, he gets off at a decent time and decides to call and see if he can pick up dinner since Yoko's been sick. She's out of breath on the phone for some reason. xD When get gets home he notices that she's changed the sheets in the bedroom and there are no tissues. ...'Cause shes's been sick, right guys?
Soon after while the family is out shopping, she leaves for a bit to buy something secretly. He tries to
find out what it is but then they're both distracted by Hinata.
The next day him and the manager go to visit the candy store so the manager can see Yoko, but the store is closed. Later, the profag makes an off-hand comment about her job and Yoko claims she was working that day, despite the profag knowing otherwise.
The night she's getting out of the bath and puts on some sexy underwear, that gets a rise of him, but then
he's suddenly concerned cause she's never wore anything like it before and it doesn't really seem like her, ie.
something a wife would wear. She changes and they go to bed.
They go another day, only to find the store open, but no one inside. Yoko emerges from inside the house,in a skirt and blouse with hard nipples much to his shock.
Yoko changes her shampoo to something with a nice smell.
Profag notices that Yoko suddenly becomes much better at oral and even swallows, and then the profag has a sudden realization and thinks she's been doing it all for him and is moved. The underwear, the shampoo, the technique, even wearing the skirt and stuff to build up her allure. -_- Yeah, the guy is seriously about as smart
as a box of hammers.
The profag starts getting much busier due to the manager being out of the office a lot, the profag thinks he's
meeting up with Kaori, but the manager says he's found someone even better than Kaori. Then, the profag is forced to work really late one night by the manager.
The next day Yoko asks if she can go on an overnight trip with some old friends. The profag is worried she might be meeting up with Otsuka, but then his manager tells him he should let her go, since one of the receptionists in the office asked for the day off to go, implying Yokowas telling the truth. He also asks if he wants to go out that day, but our profag has to decline since he'll have Hinata.
Profag ends up babysitting Hinata and takes her to the park to meet with Taro. Otsuka is there with Taro, so
profag feels bad for doubting his wife.
He's asks by the manager to deliver some work documents to him, while doing so, he runs into Kaori and they talk for a minute. Yoko won't speak to him that day.
A couple days later he comes home to find her banging Otsuka in their bedroom. He watches for a while, but then Hinata gives him away and the two come out pretending like they were talking about the store.
The profag leave work at noon the next day to look for Yoko. The store is closed, but he finds them in Otsuka's house fucking.
They don't speak at all until the profag tries to talk to her that night. He asks her to tell him honestly what's between her and Otsuka and her response is like, 'I was wondering when you'd bring this up, I guess we're the same now, huh?' He's like, 'What the hell?' and she tells him that she's decided she's gonna go live with Otsuka because he's been cheating on her. He's confused, but she then demands he explains himself and says she knows about him cheating on her with Kaori. He claims it wasn't like that, but she says she them together twice and heard more from Otsuka. Yoko says he's betrayed her, so she started a relationship with Otsuka who appreciated her as a woman and can make her feel good. She refuses to listen or believe him, and when he gets the idea to call Kaori, the business says she no longer works there. Yoko says she's going to live with Otsuka and that the profag can have the house and all their stuff, but that she is taking Hinata with her. She can't trust him anymore and she no longer has any feelings for him.
He has a goofy dream where everything is normal, only for Yoko to reveal she knows everything at then end. He wakes up to find he's alone in the house.
He spends the next couple of days trying to find Kaori, so he can prove to Yoko he was telling the truth. He can't find her and goes by the park to see Hinata and Taro playing while Otsuka gropes Yoko in mid-day, then she tells the kids to be careful and they go inside to do it. He finally finds Kaori and she agrees to help him.
They go to the candy store and she speaks with Yoko, who at first says she's lying and refuses to believe her. Kaori shows her various proof, but Yoko is confused and overwhelmed by the fact that this means the kind Otsuka has been lying to her and that the profag never betrayed her but she betrayed him completely. She
runs away, and the profag chases after her. She finally stops in the middle of the street and says she's a horrible person and can't go back to the way she used to be. Profag says he's willing
to forgive her... and then she gets hit by a truck. The end. Fucking trolls!
to get it up. He can't manage to get hard that night.
The next night she's giving him a bj and he asks if he can go in her mouth, to which she wants to know how that's gonna make a baby. He thinks it'd be fun, but she says that that's gross and asks if he's a pervert. He's looking for something to turn him on again, but won't tell her that. They proceed to have regular sex, but he can't enjoy it and feels like something is wrong. He wonders if it's his fault for not having enough energy. He can't seem to get excited about his wife.
They're having some pillow talk and she mentions that Otsuka, the grandfather of Hinata's new friend Taro, said something about her being beautiful. The profag overreacts.
Things start to progress and the pay cut thing happens, so the wife says she could maybe get a part-time during the mornings. This is a blow to his ego as the family breadwinner. Also, she wants to work at the older guy's candy shop. The two are becoming closer since Hinata and Taro made friends at pre-school, and she's talking to Otsuka a lot. The husband doesn't think it's a good idea, and is jealous of all the time she's spending with another guy, he even claims he's trying to target her. She says he's overreacting and that she wants
someone she can talk to since she's often alone with Hinata.
The profag is at work when he gets an e-mail that Hinata has gotten in an accident. Didn't get the details, but apparently Otsaka hurt himself rescuing/helping her and Yoko has agreed to work at his shop while he recovers to show her appreciation. Profag reluctantly agrees 'cause it's like the honorable thing to do? More like honorable way to let some old man move in on your wife, amirite? -_-
This is when the old man begins to seduce her. Profag thinks he might be able to do it that night, but Yoko turns him down with a weak excuse.
The first clue that something's wrong(And where I really started paying attention. It's bad, but I'm not too diligent translating eveything until something happens to really suck me in.) is when Hinata tells him that Yoko asked her to keep a secret from him. Apparently, she was late picking her up from pre-school. Profag thinks this is weird and asks Yoko about it. She embarrassingly tell him that she fell asleep during the day when she was really fooling around with Otsuka. This confuses him because he thought she was supposed to be working that day. She assures him she had the day off. /cue mystery music. They do do it that night, but rather than keep trying for a baby, he doesn't cum inside due to worrying about money now.
The next day Yoko calls him and says that Otsuka is sick and she's going to stay over at his house with Hinata
to take care of him. Cure giant neon warning signs for all of us. Profag is upset about this, but less from an 'I'm
concerned' point and more from a whiny 'But you're my wife, why are you taking care of that guy when you should be at home cooking me dinner?'
Profag is lonely at home that night and the next day decides to walk down to where the park and candy shop are to check on them when she doesn't answer her phone. He finds Hinata and Taro playing with each other outside, but Yoko and Otsuka are no where to be seen. He calls her again, and when she comes out of the house, her hair is wet and pinned up, and she's embarrassed about something. He starts getting mad because she left a pair of four-year olds running around outside unsupervised, then Otsuka comes out all smiling and like, "'Sup, Bro?" while our profag is like, "Go eat a dick, Old Man!"
Also around here, Yoko tries giving the profag a bj and since he manages to get it up, he's ready for penetration
since he thinks that's all sex is. Yoko suggests maybe he could try to go down on her, and he freaks out and thinks that's gross, kind of a reverse situation from earlier. Also, since he's managed to get hard, he says that having sex will feel better for both of them. She blows up at this point and I was pleasantly surprised. Shocked silence follows then he actually has the gall to ask her what's wrong with her tonight because she usually likes it, and she starts screaming at him that's she's never really felt good doing it with him and that she's never came once. Extreme shocked silence. Yoko asks the profag if he even looks at her as a woman anymore, but he doesn't really answer. Instead of saying more, they both decide to go to bed upset.
The next morning the two of them aren't speaking, and even though he gets done with work early for a change,
he can't bring himself to go home in the state he's in. He goes to kill time at a restaurant and sees his manager
there. They have a conversation where the manager tries to act like the Obi-Wan Kenobi of office chiefs and gives him the most Japanese explanation for what's happening ever.
I forgot to take notes during this Icause I was reading and waiting for some big reveal or revelation, but I remember thinking that in the whole spiel, it seemed long at the time, there was was like two pieces of bad advice for every one piece of good advice. Stuff about how the both of them are getting older, and their needs are changing. That Yoko is a mother now and has responsibilities that make it hard for her to be a good lover, and that his duty is to focus on work and be a good provider and employee. The problem the profag is having according to the manager is that he's not ready to accept this and understand that their newlywed lovers style of life is over. He'll be happier once he comes to term with the fact that mostly they're relationship will be more and more sexless, and that if the profag just needs to let off some stress, then that's what call girls are for. I should note that this is a pretty widely accepted notion in Japan, which is why you see crazy shit like married couple sleepibf in two different beds, or sometimes even different rooms.
The manager also says that the reason his wife is unhappy about their sex life is because the profag is a selfish
asshole. He only cares about himself in sex and other things. This is another accepted notion in Japanese life, the man is number one and the wife is a servant who should rear kids, cook dinner, and perform her nightly duties when called upon. -_- Now I'm not saying everyone other culture doesn't have problems as well, but yeah, Japan's pretty fucked up like that.
The best thing the profag can do for everyone is try to appreciate his wife more, do the best he can(read: not much) to please her, and then pick up some tail on the side.
During this conversation the profag sways back and forth from 'Hey, he's right!' to 'I don't know...' You get the
feeling he wants to try harder, and I was thinking he was going to try to talk to Yoko when he got home...
Instead, his dumb ass sees that she's still upset and decides not to say anything. -_-
The next day, the manager takes him out from work early and introduces him to a hooker with a heart of gold, Kaori. Seriously. She takes him to a hotel and after talking a bit about his problems: the lack of excitement, stress, not being about to perform. He wants to see if he's really in as bad a shape as his manager says he is. She gets naked and he manages to pop one just looking at her. Can't remember how the wording went, but his justification is because she's young and beautiful(Though personally, I found Yoko to be more attractive and everyone who talks about his wife describes her as amazing looking and I'm pretty sure she's in her mid to late
twenties. >_> Derp.) but I think it's more or less implied it's because he can see this woman in a sexual light
whereas he sees Yoko as a wife and mother first.
He also justifies sleeping with her because it's ultimately for the sake of his wife and their happiness. :/ And we
all know that the road to being NTRed is paved with good intentions. xD So, he's amazed by how different things are and gets some new resolve to be a better man thanks to Kaori's encouragement. There's a nice bit where they talk to each other and she explains that she can really see that he loves Yoko, etc.
He's able to get it up for Yoko and is proud of himself, he also fingers her and tries to help her enjoy herself
before passing out. We get the impression that Yoko seems pleased but is actually disappointed that he can't do more though our profag remains oblivious. This also results in one of the most adorably pathetic lines ever, 'I got a boner from my wife! Go me!' @_@
Unfortunately, he doesn't manage to keep it up for long and a few days later he's back in a slump. He decides to
meet with Kaori again to see if it's really something wrong with him or something else. He manages to pop one, but this time doesn't want to do it with her, as he's feeling bad for his wife. She manages to convince him by saying she likes him and offering it for free, but even then they only do it between the thighs. When they're leaving, they run into the manager, who then proceeds to start pawing at Kaori and she acts slutty towards him.
This leaves the profag in a lot of doubt as to whether anything she said was true, or if she was just acting, but
ultimately he decides it doesn't matter since he's going to focus on Yoko, swearing he won't turn into a guy like the manager.
He comes home from work the next day to find a packaged meal waiting for him. Yoko has been 'sick' and couldn't make dinner. He tells her not to worry and that he'll help around the house and with Hinata, which makes Yoko start crying for some mysterious reason.
The next day, he gets off at a decent time and decides to call and see if he can pick up dinner since Yoko's been sick. She's out of breath on the phone for some reason. xD When get gets home he notices that she's changed the sheets in the bedroom and there are no tissues. ...'Cause shes's been sick, right guys?
Soon after while the family is out shopping, she leaves for a bit to buy something secretly. He tries to
find out what it is but then they're both distracted by Hinata.
The next day him and the manager go to visit the candy store so the manager can see Yoko, but the store is closed. Later, the profag makes an off-hand comment about her job and Yoko claims she was working that day, despite the profag knowing otherwise.
The night she's getting out of the bath and puts on some sexy underwear, that gets a rise of him, but then
he's suddenly concerned cause she's never wore anything like it before and it doesn't really seem like her, ie.
something a wife would wear. She changes and they go to bed.
They go another day, only to find the store open, but no one inside. Yoko emerges from inside the house,in a skirt and blouse with hard nipples much to his shock.
Yoko changes her shampoo to something with a nice smell.
Profag notices that Yoko suddenly becomes much better at oral and even swallows, and then the profag has a sudden realization and thinks she's been doing it all for him and is moved. The underwear, the shampoo, the technique, even wearing the skirt and stuff to build up her allure. -_- Yeah, the guy is seriously about as smart
as a box of hammers.
The profag starts getting much busier due to the manager being out of the office a lot, the profag thinks he's
meeting up with Kaori, but the manager says he's found someone even better than Kaori. Then, the profag is forced to work really late one night by the manager.
The next day Yoko asks if she can go on an overnight trip with some old friends. The profag is worried she might be meeting up with Otsuka, but then his manager tells him he should let her go, since one of the receptionists in the office asked for the day off to go, implying Yokowas telling the truth. He also asks if he wants to go out that day, but our profag has to decline since he'll have Hinata.
Profag ends up babysitting Hinata and takes her to the park to meet with Taro. Otsuka is there with Taro, so
profag feels bad for doubting his wife.
He's asks by the manager to deliver some work documents to him, while doing so, he runs into Kaori and they talk for a minute. Yoko won't speak to him that day.
A couple days later he comes home to find her banging Otsuka in their bedroom. He watches for a while, but then Hinata gives him away and the two come out pretending like they were talking about the store.
The profag leave work at noon the next day to look for Yoko. The store is closed, but he finds them in Otsuka's house fucking.
They don't speak at all until the profag tries to talk to her that night. He asks her to tell him honestly what's between her and Otsuka and her response is like, 'I was wondering when you'd bring this up, I guess we're the same now, huh?' He's like, 'What the hell?' and she tells him that she's decided she's gonna go live with Otsuka because he's been cheating on her. He's confused, but she then demands he explains himself and says she knows about him cheating on her with Kaori. He claims it wasn't like that, but she says she them together twice and heard more from Otsuka. Yoko says he's betrayed her, so she started a relationship with Otsuka who appreciated her as a woman and can make her feel good. She refuses to listen or believe him, and when he gets the idea to call Kaori, the business says she no longer works there. Yoko says she's going to live with Otsuka and that the profag can have the house and all their stuff, but that she is taking Hinata with her. She can't trust him anymore and she no longer has any feelings for him.
He has a goofy dream where everything is normal, only for Yoko to reveal she knows everything at then end. He wakes up to find he's alone in the house.
He spends the next couple of days trying to find Kaori, so he can prove to Yoko he was telling the truth. He can't find her and goes by the park to see Hinata and Taro playing while Otsuka gropes Yoko in mid-day, then she tells the kids to be careful and they go inside to do it. He finally finds Kaori and she agrees to help him.
They go to the candy store and she speaks with Yoko, who at first says she's lying and refuses to believe her. Kaori shows her various proof, but Yoko is confused and overwhelmed by the fact that this means the kind Otsuka has been lying to her and that the profag never betrayed her but she betrayed him completely. She
runs away, and the profag chases after her. She finally stops in the middle of the street and says she's a horrible person and can't go back to the way she used to be. Profag says he's willing
to forgive her... and then she gets hit by a truck. The end. Fucking trolls!
-_- When it comes to this game, I'm reminded of that old Linkin' Park song that goes, 'I tried so hard, and got so far, but in the end, it doesn't even matter.'
The first part, where you play as the guy, with the NTR mystery is great. Sure, there's some stuff I'd change or
could have done without, but it's not my story and that's something you've always gotta accept. Nevertheless, it's brilliant for what it is, and best of all, it stays consistent with itself. Once you come to understand the
profag and the kind of person he is nearly all of his choice and actions make sense in context, and that's what makes for a good NTR mystery.
After the profag finally catches her with Otsuka, the story really takes a nose-dive in my opinion. One of the things that made the last Elf game so powerful was the sit down conversation between the profag and Misaki with the oden vendor. We never get one of those here. In fact, the whole thing is turned around as the profag being the cheater and Yoko vindicating her behavior. Nor is there a good scene when she talks to Kaori, she listens just enough to find out she was wrong, and then runs the fuck away. -_- There's no mention of what the manager did in this ending, either, so the profag actually only know she was cheating with Otsuka.
Still, even though this isn't the true end, I still find it more rewarding than the 'true' end, 'cause that's just
a weird giant cluster-fuck. Sometimes, seeing things from the woman's point of view increases the NTR feelings, but in this case, I think it kinda ruins them. I guess I owe it to the game to play through Yoko's part completely and take notes. I rushed through the first time 'cause it was getting really late and I wanted to see if there would be a satisfying ending or not. I skimmed through it again to make sure my timeline was right for the mystery review. I'd give the Mystery end a 8/10. It'd easily be a nine or ten if not for the truck ending bullshit.
The True end I'd give a 5/10, mostly 'cause I'm bitter about it ruining a great, interesting story. A lot of the sex scenes are awesome, though. xD When I go back and piece everything together better, it might even earn a 6/10, but that's really the best I can give it from a NTR purist's view.
I still recommend everyone play the first mystery part for the awesomeness, and playing from Yoko's perspective just for the secenes. In my book, seeing the true story is setting yourself up for some fail in the end.
The first part, where you play as the guy, with the NTR mystery is great. Sure, there's some stuff I'd change or
could have done without, but it's not my story and that's something you've always gotta accept. Nevertheless, it's brilliant for what it is, and best of all, it stays consistent with itself. Once you come to understand the
profag and the kind of person he is nearly all of his choice and actions make sense in context, and that's what makes for a good NTR mystery.
After the profag finally catches her with Otsuka, the story really takes a nose-dive in my opinion. One of the things that made the last Elf game so powerful was the sit down conversation between the profag and Misaki with the oden vendor. We never get one of those here. In fact, the whole thing is turned around as the profag being the cheater and Yoko vindicating her behavior. Nor is there a good scene when she talks to Kaori, she listens just enough to find out she was wrong, and then runs the fuck away. -_- There's no mention of what the manager did in this ending, either, so the profag actually only know she was cheating with Otsuka.
Still, even though this isn't the true end, I still find it more rewarding than the 'true' end, 'cause that's just
a weird giant cluster-fuck. Sometimes, seeing things from the woman's point of view increases the NTR feelings, but in this case, I think it kinda ruins them. I guess I owe it to the game to play through Yoko's part completely and take notes. I rushed through the first time 'cause it was getting really late and I wanted to see if there would be a satisfying ending or not. I skimmed through it again to make sure my timeline was right for the mystery review. I'd give the Mystery end a 8/10. It'd easily be a nine or ten if not for the truck ending bullshit.
The True end I'd give a 5/10, mostly 'cause I'm bitter about it ruining a great, interesting story. A lot of the sex scenes are awesome, though. xD When I go back and piece everything together better, it might even earn a 6/10, but that's really the best I can give it from a NTR purist's view.
I still recommend everyone play the first mystery part for the awesomeness, and playing from Yoko's perspective just for the secenes. In my book, seeing the true story is setting yourself up for some fail in the end.
p.s. Only seven more days 'til Valentines Day! and you can't spell Valentine without NT--wait, DAMNIT! -_-
but i have been busy playing(getting my ass-kicked in) SoulCaliburV 
and i finally got Monster Hunter portable 3rd HD ver. I shipped it from Japan and iv'e been hooked since.
I Love This Game
(yeah i am a lilith fan xD)
welcome my friend to the dark path of NTR. climbing the pile of crap NTR in the never ending search for good NTR
Shine