- Apr 1, 2012
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funny and amazing and strange, oh renano may i be the he that you'd like to marry
*cough back to the point
nice story eh~okay yay umm.....the story bla bla bla, bla bla bla bla bla and bla bla 20 minutes bla bla for bla bla ahh what the heck its not my entry , continues bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla, bla bla bla bla bla bla bla~
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Haha~
Thank you Ralium. ^^
I could have made the story longer... but I think it's 'just enough' for now~
The key to a story is to make the reader feel like he or she is a part of it. Have them engaged and read to the very end while recalling some of the parts.
Whether it's funny or informative, the most important is 'feeling'.
I like your picture. xD
Good use of text on his shirt. ;3
I like the colors especially the red.
Interesting 'story'. xD
funny and amazing and strange, oh renano may i be the he that you'd like to marry





but it would be fun i'd like to see the power you'll have ^^
renano will change then there will be no love
then i'll just go to a desert sit there for the rest of my life thinking about the old renano~
AhGwee you mean its not alright that your name is there??
now that i think of egozi should've been there too
maybe if i remove samy's name and put egozi instead xD