So that was you posting on /h/. A guy losing out to a futa because he doesn't realize she's got a dick is a pretty great idea and would make for a pretty fantastic mystery game, though from my understanding that's not what you're going for exactly. That being the case I doubt there's much for me to say on the project itself, but I'll definitely give it a follow once you've started working on it. NTR needs to be brought into as many genres as possible!
no one would expect your girl to be getting dick... from well... another girl lol
Exactly, and a heroine is going to let her guard down too... The protagonist would never guess what's happening until it's too late.
Hell, the same could be said for having a lesbian antagonist in NTR, but I know I won't have any better luck finding games like that either. Such a shame.
Since there's pretty much no games like this out there I will have to make it third person to appeal to as much people as possible. It's about a guy leaving for a month and his co-worker putting the moves on his wife in the meantime and will definitely have some classic NTR "secretly doing it behind his back" scenes, but can't make it too niche I'm afraid.
I might come up like the guy that is never satisfied with anything, but I don't care, since I think good criticism is crucial to make something good. Please don't take it badly, since my intention is for you to make the best game posible. So here we go.
"It's about aguy leaving for a month". Don't do that please, if you do, you will waste the potential the game has. Some posts ago we were talking about the lack of NTR feeling in the new Atelier Sakura game because the boyfriend was not really present. Also we have talked a lot about the potential of straight-shota for making advances on the heroines while passing unsuspected under the boyfriend/husband radar. And now we are talking about how futanari can accomplish that as well. Knowing all that, why would you want to make the husband go away? This game has the potential for showing how the wife gets stolen right under the husband's nose, and you are trowing that potential away by making the husband leaves. And I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking this, I mean, read the quoted comments.
The way I see it, there are two reasons why the husband leaves in a business trip in a NTR game:
1. It's something not uncommon in japan. I mean there is even some japanese words for it (出稼ぎ - 旅稼ぎ - 出張 -海外出張 - 出張る).
2. Because is easy for the developer. You make the husband go away and when he is back her wife is already the other guy's mistress. This is not necesarilly a bad thing, since depending on the story and the circunstances of the characters there might be a need for the husband to go away, but in a good game this situation serves the propose of the story, making the game better, not easier for the developer.
i think making good developing decisión while making a game implies two things: Listen what people wants/likes and understanding why that decisión might be necessary in the game. By seeing it like that, I think the decission of making the husband leave is a terrible one. If it was me, I would take full advantage of the fact that the husband can't suspect of the futanari. I would make the futanari do advances on the wife with the husband near or even just in front of him. She could even pull stuff like
THIS, withouth the husband noticing what's really happening, making him realize that something is off, withouth being able to put his finger on it. Then make the husband go in a business trip at the end of the game (so the futa can fuck the wife the whole week), coming back one day before trying to surprise her wife, to finally discovering the affair (standart, yes, but effective) I think people would love to see something like that, at least I would love to.
Also I hope you do mystery, as EmmaMan said, it will be a fantastic mystery game. Even with a third person narrative, it can have a husband POV mystery in the first half and a wife POV reveleation in the second half. An example of this is the Toaru Hahaoya series (yeah, I know I mention that series a lot, but it makes so many things right, that it just happens to be the perfect example for a lot of things). People are starving for a good mystery NTR game, you should consider that.
I'm a big fan of futanari, but I miss the old school futanari (I loved the Mysty Moon Metropolis series of magazines). It's kind of hard to find good futanari nowadays. I'll post some examples of my favorite futanari characters in hoping of helping you developing your character:
Itami Suzuka from Spermatank (I think that's her name, I'm not sure because her name doesn't have furigana). My favorite futanari character. She really enbodies the futanari character archetype perfectly. Warning though, since the manga has some guro in it.
Aoi from the Dulce Report series
Sogahara from TSF Monogatari
Midori Kamiya
This girl based on Satori Komeji from Touhou this one is more on the submisse type, so it might not be useful to you, but I love how it shows how horny and insatiable futanaris can be. For instance
in this ugoira she is forced to eyaculate continually 310 times untill she finally runs out of semen (look for the whole bathtub series of ugoiras, they are really hot).
I hope my words are useful to you and you take them into consideration. I will be looking forward to your game.
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