Toki Wo Kakeru Shoujo Vexel yay!

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Made in Photoshop Cs6 :3

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[HappyPeppyJimmy]

I see much potential in this, if you are bothered to do the work.

i dont really see the point of double renders, but the colour schemes are great.

the messy pen lines to put me off though, sharp clean pen lines are really do set these kinds of sigs off and make them look unique. i dont mind the blue, red and orange shapes, its just the messy lines in the middle.

Also the text is set very awkwardly in front of the focal point. try and put it somewhere less busy.