Set in an alternate time line begging in the year 2001 my story follows two teenage brothers (bill and Murry) who would do anything for each other. The boys are sons to a king who rules half the world and is at war to try and take the other half. The both boys join the military and become great warriors. Eventually during the battles the king dies and both Bill and Murry are made rulers. Not long after the boys win the war and rule the entire world equally. During the war both boys meatbjjdjx the girls they would fall in love with. Years after the war is over the boys are now men and Bill is forced to kill Murry's wife or his wife would be killed. He does so and this tears the world in half and Murry swears he'll make his brother hurt as much as he does. The world is split in two with one brother leading one half and the other the other half. At first Bill refuses to go to war (already feeling terrible for killing his brothers wife) and Just defends The part of the country he lives in. Until Murry (while trying to shoot his brother and misses) kills one of Bills son's. Causing an all out war between the two.
Sorry for using the word "brother" a lot.
Bill and Murry will not be the characters name's. I just didn't have names yet so I used that.
This is a rough idea of what I want to write. There's still a lot I plan on adding.
My goal is to get people to care about the characters as much as they would there own family.
Please be as critical as you want.
Now with all that being said, is this a good idea?
Sorry for using the word "brother" a lot.
Bill and Murry will not be the characters name's. I just didn't have names yet so I used that.
This is a rough idea of what I want to write. There's still a lot I plan on adding.
My goal is to get people to care about the characters as much as they would there own family.
Please be as critical as you want.
Now with all that being said, is this a good idea?