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    "What Would....."

    To the little boy who was just kissed on the cheek on the playground by the girl he fancies: What went through your mind at that moment?

    To the young lady, hiding her tears: How do you feel about your loved one whom you just lost to the next world?

    To the young man, who puts on a somewhat cheerful mask: How do you feel without your first love? Do you miss her?

    And to the old man, who just crossed to the other side: What regrets do you have? What do you wish you had said?


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    Re: "What Would....."

    I feel that there should be more to this that just the above 4 lines..?
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    Re: "What Would....."

    I think what you wrote don't relate to the topic when it's about the feeling

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    Re: "What Would....."

    @Pichu665889, It might be short, but I believe that not all writings need to be long, and it might make a little more sense if read as moments from a story.

    @bioniocle, That may be true, but sometimes the name doesn't connect to the subject at hand.

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    Re: "What Would....."

    Quote Originally Posted by AxelVIII View Post
    @Pichu665889, It might be short, but I believe that not all writings need to be long, and it might make a little more sense if read as moments from a story.

    @bioniocle, That may be true, but sometimes the name doesn't connect to the subject at hand.
    It's just that I felt I was left hanging at the edge of a cliff after reading the fourth line. But then again that is an interesting way to end and if that was what you were going for then you've done it well
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    Re: "What Would....."

    It was so good that i wasn't able to pass without posting a reply .

    Hope it wasn't short .

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