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    Poetry Thread

    Come on, folks! Crack ye knuckles and post your poems.

    Let me starto~ (I'm an amateur and had no formal study in terms of poetry writing).

    ~freestyler~

    Here are some of the stuff I made:

      Spoiler: Friend 
    Was it so long ago,
    That you and I met
    In a room where most
    Ignore each other.

    It was that moment
    That our eyes crossed
    And you smiled
    And I smiled.

    Yes, it wasn’t that long ago
    That we bent our heads
    To talk in secret
    And laugh at our own childish pleasure.

    It was that moment
    That I knew I had a friend:
    Someone I could laugh with,
    And perhaps cry with.

    Yes, it was our scattered lives
    That drew us close
    And opened our eyes to a reality
    That we are not alone when we think we are.

    It wasn’t so distant then.
    That memory
    Of you and I
    Smiling.

    And so perhaps,
    It won’t be of much matter
    If we would be separated once again
    For I know I’ve a friend
    In you.


      Spoiler: Inevitable Silence 
    do you fear the inevitable silence
    that comes and goes without warning
    do you fear the irksome pauses
    that we sometimes have when we talk
    it's like showing us we're running out of stories
    or perhaps we're slowly reaching the apex of interest
    do you fear these meddlesome thoughts
    that pass by quickly through our minds
    it's like we're holding on to something fragile
    when perhaps it's already lost


      Spoiler: Bleed 
    bleed
    like i do
    when i see your face
    your eyes hold me
    with that withering gaze
    weep
    like i always do
    when we pass by each other like strangers
    your silence breaks me
    and tears my heart to pieces
    grieve
    like they do
    when you greet me in my coffin
    i've fought and lost the battle
    but i'm probably not in heaven


      Spoiler: Random 
    i fear getting close to people
    there's always that risk
    they lie even when they smile
    they can hurt you
    but i fear being alone more
    there's that familiar silence
    that slowly invites
    loneliness in


    (haiku)

    there is nothing here
    sakura leaves keep falling
    i am missing you


      Spoiler: 10-min Poetry 
    The silent lovers share a fleeting kiss
    A kiss made by the eyes
    One blue-green, one amber
    With one look, both drown in sighs

    A woman holds a child in her arms
    While her eyes go astray
    To where a man sits beside his wife
    The searing pain won't go away

    The man smiles but thinks of her
    The woman in his peripheral view
    He sees her with her newborn child
    The emptiness won't go away

    They have only that moment to share
    A kiss made by the eyes
    But for all the love they silently keep
    Only heartache is the prize
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    can't write anything but haikus... but i'll try xD

      Spoiler: Boredom 
    Boredom, it is my
    enemy, eternally
    fighting against me.


      Spoiler: Smile 
    When I see your smile,
    your beautiful eyes, I can
    feel my heart beating inside.
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    ^i didn't know that you're into stuffs like that ~ well done verses.
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    loool. here's one i made up for you xD

      Spoiler: Mr Tako 
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    A two-part poem I made months back.

      Spoiler: Part I: The Healer 
    solitary soul, i see you pass before me
    your body is covered in a thick smoke of blue and gray
    i see your head bowed, shoulders heavy
    your face clouded with sorrow and dismay

    what ails you, dear soul, and makes you drag your feet
    as if shackled heavily, invisibly and without hope
    what sucks your spirit and makes you weak,
    makes you tire of everything, unable to cope

    dear heart, look back and see me before you
    with smiles of welcome and open arms
    hear me call beyond your thick smoke of gray and blue
    and i shall cover you and keep you warm

    look back, my love, for i exist right here and now
    waiting for you to walk, stumble, and even collapse into me
    i would whisper words of peace and love, this i vow
    just stop for a moment, look back and see me


      Spoiler: Part II: The Lost 
    i stumble towards the unending darkness before me
    my body is filthy and overwhelmed with confusion
    my gait, once kingly, now walk languidly
    my mind, once lucid, offers no solution

    i have smiled truly and welcomed life before
    and yet now, my hands are empty and i am lost
    looking for the end or the exit that seemed too far;
    now, wondering and pondering my life's purpose

    i walk alone in darkness and i fear i shall never be found
    my soul is trapped and i cannot, for the life of me, find the key
    in my path there is no light, no air, and even no sound
    and yet i hope, pray, for someone to save me
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    Another haiku ^^

      Spoiler: Sword 
    As I draw my sword,
    the blade glints, more beautiful
    than any weapon.
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    haiku for today:

    i hate you paypal
    why did you freeze my account?
    what a load of crap!
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    Haiku of the day

      Spoiler: End 
    Exams are over,
    Time to celebrate, the end
    of my high school life.
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    Re: Poetry Thread

    I have no experience in poetry, but I will try.
      Spoiler: Nocturne 
    Drinking that cannot be controlled.
    Depression that cry in the alleyways.
    Corruption fills the sky like an eternal nightmare.
    Darkness that consumes all in sight.
    Filthy women that multiply as time passes.
    This is nocturne.

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    Re: Poetry Thread

    Well someone asked for my poems so here:

      Spoiler: First
     
    Our Paradise
    In a world we love that is clean and green,
    Lies the mountains, the forests and the peaceful seas.
    We have homes and families that are strong and keen,
    That loves to plant a lot of flowers and trees

    Oh the shimmer, the glimmer and shine of the sun,
    Gives light, gives hope to everyone.
    The peace and joy we have these days,
    Would forever remain like our elders say.

    Our ties and bonds would be much stronger,
    If we believe in the Lord and always pray.
    Our wish to always have celebrations and laughter,
    Would never end to merciless slaughter.





      Spoiler: another one  
    The moonlight sky
    The moon that shines,
    All so bright.
    That reflects in the seas during the night;
    Would bring joy and give us light,
    For God is with us all tonight.

    The moon up so high in the sky,
    Guides some travellers that love to fly.
    The moon, the stars and clouds above,
    That God gave to us, whom he loves.

    My dear child that sleeps tonight,
    May you grow up strong and very bright.
    You’re talents would guide you to your dreams,
    And never let you fall inside a bad realm.





      Spoiler: the 3rd 
    One’s Path
    The sound of the wind is calling me,
    Telling me that the world is big to see.
    The gentle breeze knows my name,
    They even know how to, make me feel ashamed.

    The sea so quiet that gives a low whisper,
    To my mind, to my heart these things linger.
    Showing me what needs to be done;
    And part of my mission is to teach everyone,
    That living our life to the fullest,
    Is the best way to say you’re one of the greatest.
    No one controls you but yourself,
    And I would just guide you to find thyself.

    We see, we speak differently;
    But to my eyes we are one family;
    That helps each other when crisis strike,
    And acts as a corrector o make everything right.






      Spoiler: the fourth 
    A Human’s Life
    A glass so fragile,
    That is beyond one’s style.
    Is easy to break,
    And easy to remake
    But what does it contain that makes it so special,
    That makes one’s life easy to mingle.

    In front of the light,
    It shines so bright.
    The reflecting images I see,
    Makes it change its way with others;
    And change its attitude like our forefathers.

    Like seeing ourselves in the mirror,
    Makes us see the true warrior,
    Beneath the skin and flesh of our own bodies.
    Even if you put up a dress, a gown in a day;
    You yourself have your own special way,
    To make others see you,
    Like I do.




      Spoiler: I know : 
    The Storm
    The weather so cold,
    That drops a thousand fold.
    Which are tears from the heavens,
    Above our mountains.

    The boats, the planes, the travels are cancelled;
    In times so fast these things are held.
    Oh the oceans, the seas and bodies of water,
    Are also affected by our bad weather.

    What makes this things occur in our time,
    When we have a lot of problems above the line.
    We should take care of the things we had,
    That is given by the Lord, Our dear God.










      Spoiler: again 
    Friendship
    A bond so strong,
    That last so long.
    A sparkle of light,
    Fills your sight,
    With bronze, silver, and gold,
    As precious as the friendship you hold.
    The might and strength within you,
    Would fill your life and make you through
    The challenges that waits for you.

    The things you share together,
    Should always be cherished forever.
    Every journey you take,
    Would help you see the journey you would make.
    And the way you treat each other,
    Is as if she’s your sister.



    this is my favorite

      Spoiler: Well the last . 
    Our Earth
    In the ocean so bright
    That is filled with light,
    Lives the fishes, dolphins and corals
    Who lives happily because they are free.

    In the land which is filled with trees,
    Lives a lot of creatures and also bees.
    We step, walk and run on it,
    But it is also the place we sleep and sit.

    Oh the sky
    That is up so high
    Is the place where the birds love to fly.
    The clouds, sun, moon and stars
    Live in this place
    Where the earth’s beauty lies.


    What do you think?
    Last edited by Michi 18; August 9th, 2012 at 10:29 AM.
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