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    this fragile heart

    (see my blog to make reading this a better experience)
    http://tinysnowangel.blogspot.com/20...ile-heart.html




    there are pieces of my heart,
    like glass that has fallen apart

    Tears of mine held back and hushed
    deep words that made me crushed

    is it wrong to be full of love?
    free and pure like a dove?

    Silenced by fear, lonely as the moon
    I have become a prisoner of my room

    hours pass by, few care to say hi
    with a life like this, would I rather die?

    with all of my heart that is left, I will say this
    there is enough life in me to give a kiss

    passionately wailing, am I without?
    loneliness has failed me, I won't doubt

    the song in my heart is still singing
    giving up is very tempting..

    my heart will one day be restored
    until then, I'll share this love forever
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    Re: this fragile heart

    awww... I'm a sucker for poems with rhyme

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    Re: this fragile heart

    may I make some suggestions? they're minor and might help give your poem a smoother flow.

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    Re: this fragile heart

    Hmm always a flower in the back? xD

    I should look at the writing thread somewhat closer @_@
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    Re: this fragile heart

    The main background to my blog is a flower~ but it really does add to everything
    I would have music if I knew how :/ most of what I could possibly add is stuff that I really don't want x-x

    My poetry is not open for suggestions, sorry x-x
    These are mostly things about me that I go through~
    I might write about something if given the idea though.
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    Re: this fragile heart

    Beautiful poem, wish I could write as good.

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