For the odd poems~

[Ghost Kitty~]

Post random poems that interest you~
Could be your own if you want~

Anyhow... a properish poem thread for [MENTION=18465]renano[/MENTION]; ojou sama~ x3

Spoiler: Not quite fitting for its original intent... xD

The warm breeze of a summer night,
An allure as the jewels of the sky,

Warmth and comfort to those who lost their light,
On whom they could rely,

Wings to those who can no longer walk,
On gentle winds they fly,

But look upon the tower's clock,
I plea you rest your weary eyes,

Even for just a moment,
Before the sun's rise~​

 

[Monjster]

I love this one. It's rather short:

“Tiger got to hunt, bird got to fly;
Man got to sit and wonder 'why, why, why?'
Tiger got to sleep, bird got to land;
Man got to tell himself he understand.”

 

[renano]

Post random poems that interest you~
Could be your own if you want~

Anyhow... a properish poem thread for [MENTION=18465]renano[/MENTION]; ojou sama~ x3

Spoiler: Not quite fitting for its original intent... xD

The warm breeze of a summer night,
An allure as the jewels of the sky,

Warmth and comfort to those who lost their light,
On whom they could rely,

Wings to those who can no longer walk,
On gentle winds they fly,

But look upon the tower's clock,
I plea you rest your weary eyes,

Even for just a moment,
Before the sun's rise~​

Feels melancholy...

I probably wouldn't 'rest my weary eyes' if there's something I want to do, but the message and imagery is quite lovely.

Very nice thread, Sam~

I love this one. It's rather short:

“Tiger got to hunt, bird got to fly;
Man got to sit and wonder 'why, why, why?'
Tiger got to sleep, bird got to land;
Man got to tell himself he understand.”

Another great one~

/me takes out some of her Kurt Vonnegut books

Love how on the surface it appears simple, but there's actually more depth to it philosophical wise.


Hmm... short original poem right this instant.

"And how many times have I cried
Because no one looks me in the eye
Instead they sigh... with noses held high
Breathing words of deception as a reply
Here I lie, caring not to try
But die."

Depressing... morbid... Nope! It's happiness!

 

[Ignis]

Interesting... here's something I specifically wrote for banner image... and purposely shrank to nigh unreadability.

Spoiler: Don't laugh!

I pace, following the lure
of your glittering figure
when, under the moonlight,
you enter my sight.
Not even the breeze
from your fluttering wings
can calm my throbbing heart,
fearing to be apart.
I stand, stunned and frozen,
as I gaze at my chosen.
You extend your hand,
worrying no reprimand,
pulling me to your embrace,
where I find solace.
Just you and me, my fairy,
in this moonlit prairie.

 

[renano]

Interesting... here's something I specifically wrote for banner image... and purposely shrank to nigh unreadability.

Spoiler: Don't laugh!

I pace, following the lure
of your glittering figure
when, under the moonlight,
you enter my sight.
Not even the breeze
from your fluttering wings
can calm my throbbing heart,
fearing to be apart.
I stand, stunned and frozen,
as I gaze at my chosen.
You extend your hand,
worrying no reprimand,
pulling me to your embrace,
where I find solace.
Just you and me, my fairy,
in this moonlit prairie.

It sounds incredibly enchanting~

I feel the tenderness and how such a love can be fragile and special.

I believe the simplicity enhances the mood and tone of the poem.

Thank you for sharing. When I gaze at the banner, I will also be enraptured by such gentle thoughts.

 

[GenKiDan]

hmm that was actually quite good to my ears. And whats more it was easy to "feel" the feelings behind the words so to speak.

Elegant~ With a sense of excitement.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Wee~ people noticed this x3

Oh :o Finally gets to see what the banner says x3 I thought it mightve been something related to the vn the image came from..~

 

[Monjster]

I praise myself for coming here first :P


Well, do u only take few lines from songs? I heard amazing ones recently

 

[renano]

I think lines from songs should be fine. They can still be poetic.

Go for it Monjster~

I wonder if this thread can be in the Creative Corner. Miscellaneous writings.

 

[Monjster]

Damn, I have so many I want to share :P . Let's start with this rock band I found recently, Ill keep it short:

One little brick then another
And I will build that wall anyway
You can find me there
Rested and calm
Without mask
This is where I will stay


and

If stones could dream,
They'd dream of being laid,
Side-by-side,
Piece-by-piece,
And turned into a castle,
For some towering queen,
They're unable to know.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Would you prefer this in the creativity corner?~ I dont really mind either way~

Lol all the quotes that you usually put in the lpw?~

 

[renano]

It's fine in the Spam Section because most active users visit here.

Putting it in the Creative Corner might feel a bit more 'restricted' like how we discussed your dreams and why the feeling was different from one thread to another.

Besides, Ignis nii-sama honored us with his presence. This is a blessing.


[MENTION=4854]monster[/MENTION] ;

Thank you. I found more new music to listen~

What's good about expanding the 'poetic licenses' to music or even nursery rhymes for this thread is that people can discover new things and learn from one another their likes and dislikes.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Okies x3 I guess the writing section is a bit... quiet..~

Nyaa wants to write another poem but lacking inspiration...

 

[renano]

Truth be told, I was thinking about a future contest in the Writing Section. We don't need tools like Sony Vegas or Photoshop or even a tablet. I believe this is something just about everyone can do.

Looking forward to more of your odd poems then~

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Hmm... would make for a nice contest~ Would we have themes or just free write?~

Ill post when i can come up with one x3

 

[renano]

Since it'll be the first contest of its kind, I want it to be semi-free write... because I want chopsticks in there. >w<

Short story, poem, play... is up to you. Theme is up to you. Length is up to you.


Guess I'll come up with poems later as well~

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Lol x3 Always have to have the chopsticks xD

 

[Ignis]

You can just put this thread here or get it moved to the Creativity Corner. Your choice; either way is fine. It's true that this section gets way more exposure and has the 'lax' factor that may encourage people to post more, though, which makes for a good starting point.

Besides, Ignis nii-sama honored us with his presence. This is a blessing.

I know I get flowery with words sometimes, but the following is no mere grandiose hyperbole: your replies to the poems posted in this thread are themselves poetry. If anyone here makes others feel honoured, it's you.

Anyway, if y'all are intending to make some sort of poem competition or something similar, hit me up.

 

[Monjster]

Sad clown, sad clown
Watch the wheels roll around
Take that money into town
Go buy a drink.
Sad clown, sad clown
Always with that same frown
Circus train got you down,
You're thinking bout leaving town.


It's just random.


I had a drink the other day
Opinions were like kittens
I was giving them away.

 

[GenKiDan]

Hmm I checked some poems I had written a bit back...but maybe I should save some of them for later if there's going to be a contest...

 

[renano]

You can just put this thread here or get it moved to the Creativity Corner. Your choice; either way is fine. It's true that this section gets way more exposure and has the 'lax' factor that may encourage people to post more, though, which makes for a good starting point.

I know I get flowery with words sometimes, but the following is no mere grandiose hyperbole: your replies to the poems posted in this thread are themselves poetry. If anyone here makes others feel honoured, it's you.

Anyway, if y'all are intending to make some sort of poem competition or something similar, hit me up.

Likewise. How Ignis nii-sama interweaves his words with such elegance and precision is truly melodic and resonates within us all. This is not flattery. It is a testament to your character and mindset in which makes us respect and admire you even more~

Yes, I was thinking about such a competition.

After much contemplation, I shall open a poem competition around the springtime, preferably March or April. It'll open after my drawing contest for this coming winter has been completed.

Please look forward to it, Ignis nii-sama~



@ Sam

I'll make it bonus points for the chopsticks... maybe a poem about eating under the sakura tree with their chopsticks. >w<

Or chopsticks and pancakes.

Decisions, decisions.

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Eating pancakes with chopsticks under a sakura tree xD Ahh the bonus points

Contests lining up..~ I could try hosting some if you wish to rest..~

 

[renano]

Thank you my dear Sam~

If you can or if you want, just mention my name when an entry pops up or if someone has a question. You don't need to answer the question and you don't need to keep track as to how many entered.

Just be friendly to those who visit the thread and be yourself~

Sakura tree and chopsticks... /me thinks someone will take her idea

 

[Ghost Kitty~]

Ahh well okies then..~ Do the same as always x3

Hmm.. perhaps youll get proper recognition this time?~

 

[Ralium]

awww poetry thread please continue posting romantic poems for me sam

Thus I have wondered what it is to rule~

I have killed~

I have judged~

I have endured~

I have learned.

Thus through all this now I ask myself~

Have I become a wise man...?