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    Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)



    Swing & Miss is an adult visual novel, or eroge. It is a mostly linear story centered around themes such as swinging, netorare (or netorase), moral degeneration, and female domination. It will contain a lengthy story and our artist Iero's beautiful artwork (you can contact her at satosetn@yahoo.com) to illustrate the characters and (erotic) event scenes.


    The story centers around the protagonist (you) and your wife Fiona. The two of you have been married for over a decade and get along perfectly. You know you're blessed to have a wife like Fiona, but you can't help but wish you had a more active sex life with her...

    Meanwhile your new co-worker Davis is struggling with a similar issue: although frequency is not their problem, him and his new wife Kyleigh both want to take the lead in the bedroom. Davis comes to you with the obvious solution: if the two of you just swap wives, there's two perfect sexual matches instead of two mismatches...


    The characters the story focuses on are your wife Fiona, your co-worker Davis, and his wife Kyleigh. You will read most of the story from the protagonist's (the player can decide his name) perspective, but later in the game there's plenty of scenes from Fiona's perspective as well. At the start of the game you can decide whether you want to read the scenes from your wife's perspective as well, or would rather fully immerse yourself into the protagonist and read his scenes only.

    Fiona is a woman in her mid-thirties and the protagonist's wife. She was raised conservatively and taught not to talk about things like sex. She's kind and an amazing cook.

    As the story progresses she will open up about sex and be less embarrassed about the subject or the initiation of act itself. The question is until what point this is still a positive development...

    Kyleigh is the protagonist's co-worker's newlywed wife and the protagonist's partner in the swapping arrangement. She's assertive and easy-going, and works in fashion.

    She's very open sexually and seems to know no shame. She's dominant by nature, a trait which emerges more and more as the protagonist spends more time with her in the bedroom...

    Davis is the protagonist's co-worker and his subordinate. He's young and permanently cheerful.

    He loves his wife very much, but is also very interested in the protagonist's wife. He appears to have the best intentions at first, but may have ulterior motives...


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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)


    Hello everyone, I'm looking for good examples of sex poses in eroge. Right now a lot of the planned CGs are variations of the same "lying down sex pose", but I'd like to add some variation by having different normal sex poses.

    I'm mostly looking for scenes with a girl/woman lying down while the man has sex with her right now. Other than that anything goes, the more interesting the pose or angle the better. Preferably as many similar images (from different games but with the same pose/angle) as possible. PM me if you have any, in return I can send you a short test version of the game. Thank you.
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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    I'll have a test teaser ready in a little while, it will have prologue of the game but without the definitive GUI/menu or any sound. If you're interested in helping me test it (mostly typo/grammar errors and ideas for scenes/details now), join this Discord and ask me to add you to the tester group. I'll only accept new people while I feel it's useful and will clean up the list once in a while by removing inactive members, so only ask to join if you're planning to discuss, please.
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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    I've decided to go about the releases this way: there will be a free version which contains one full "arc", and a version for Patreon supporters which is constantly being updated. Each new Patreon supporter version will contain at least one new sex scene (with new art). No monthly charge, only per game update (and no charge for hotfixes or other small updates, of course).

    After a full arc is completed for Patreon supporters, it will be added to the free version as well, but the supporter version will always be a little further along until the game is completely finished and becomes free for everyone.

    Hopefully the above system is fair enough to everyone. I'm not hoping to make a profit on this project, but I am paying several people for their work for this project, so this is more to keep things manageable for me, especially if I want to add stuff like voice acting in the future.

    I'll probably release the free version and first "Patreon version" sometime this month. The Patreon version will also go to testers, but only to testers from whom I receive feedback.
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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    Visit the Patreon page to download the teaser prologue or the first supporter version now. All feedback/comments are welcome.
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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    I'll wait until the game is finished before playing it, but wanted to add that while the art obviously isn't absolutely perfect, I really like the overall heroine design - kudos for the unique look.

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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    I'll echo traversal's thoughts - the heroine's design is great!

    My thoughts from playing the prologue, mostly my subjective opinion. Some are nit-picky and most you probably already know about being that it's version 0.00.1, still hopefully somewhat useful. I've played very few OEL VNs, so I'm basically comparing it to JP ones.

      Spoiler: wall of text 
    Story
    Overall it I think it was OK - at least enough for me to want to read the entire thing . My main criticism is a sore lack of exposition in general. I feel like the genre does best when you genuinely know the characters, enough that you pick up on even minor behavioural changes. As it is, the prologue had things progress way too quickly. I'd have liked loads more text, even if only the first half of the events are in the prologue. Introducing the characters more and their daily lives before things start really happening.

    When Davis comes to give you a report, there's a line about how despite appearances he's skilled and trusted, why? Why not a quick anecdote that showed more of his character, e.g. handled a very tricky customer after taking them drinking, upstaged a senior worker using his charisma etc. Davis got married a week before the player joined, "loved nothing more being asked about his new wife" yet a month later he's not even shown his wedding photos to the player?! Can we get a little more about why he might not be 100% satisfied with his relationship and what he likes about Fiona?

    I'd have liked to see the couples get to know each other much better before suddenly doing double date -> weekly swap double date. I mean, there was like 50 lines of conversation between them over dinner and the date. Not much of in the way of player thoughts either. As a rusult, felt very unreal imo. I'd have liked it slower, say after a few times of "normal" meet-ups Davis starts to do slightly bolder things each time, maybe you noticed Fiona looking/staring at Davis or Kyleigh etc. Perhaps the guys share a common interest or pasttime, or even just drinks after work, gradually get closer to best friends before talking about the swap double date.

    Sex scene was.. not great. Art was OK. Text, well, there was like 10 lines... way more detail please! I want to read more of the player's thoughts, especially about Fiona's more assertive behaviour and the inner conflict that might bring to him. What about her emotions and expressions?

    Characters
    Protagonist is a "Department manager in an office", why can't he have a real job?! Even if it a generic ACME, telling us a little about where he and Davis work would help immersion. Player had his doubts about the job move, does that mean he did poorly at his last job? Shitty boss, long hours? Maybe the new jobs is simple high stress/responsibility position? He's not sure Fiona would have agreed to move if he wasn't confident, he didn't share her doubts with her - why! Does she not have confidence in him? Has something happened before? Where/how did he meet Fiona? Does he think he's not worthy of her? What does Fiona do during the day - we know she's a housewife who is good at cooking, but is she involved in the neighbourhood, does she like gossiping with her friends or just watch TV all day? Does she have friends! What are her likes and hobbies? Is she picky or fussy about something? Maybe she hates being alone. Are there any signs she's not happy? Her thoughts on having children? Ditto all this with the other two (though I guess maybe you want to save that for later in the story).

    Technical
    Character sprites should be zoomed in more, especially in one on one conversation. Super weird to see Fiona so far away when you're supposedly across the table from her having dinner. Think this would help notice expression changes too, they aren't too obvious at the moment.
    Text needs to be a little lower in the text box, comes really close to overlapping character names.
    The options along the bottom are reeealy tiny. Windows 10 x64 if it makes any difference.
    Absolutely needs a right click -> hide text window option.
    Ideally needs a text window opacity slider.
    History sometimes gets a bit messed up with overlapping text.
    About page should probably have a link to your site/Patreon.
    No music!

    Sorry, that ended up all over the place and way more than I planned to write. All intended in a constructive spirit, please don't take it the wrong way - I'm actually really looking forward to playing the finished thing

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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    I completely missed the notification of your response, thanks for the expansive reply! Your comments will help me expand on the story/dialogue a little more, but I have to keep some kind of balance for those who do not enjoy reading endless walls of text. Some things are intentionally vague for self-insert purposes.

    Most technical issues are issues which will be fixed with the GUI still being designed at the moment.
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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    I just got to playing it. I agree with jikara, particularly about the sex scene. I hope the length isn't indicative of how long the other ones will be.

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    Re: Swing & Miss (NTR swinging eroge project)

    Swing & Miss version 0.02.2 released for Swapper Patrons
    Compared to version 0.01.1 this version adds:
    • 1 new chapter
    • 2 new CG event scenes with a total of 11 new variations
    • 8 new sprite variations
    • 1K more words
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