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- January 12th, 2022, 11:23 PM #23691
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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare General Discussion Thread
This is some incredible work you've done so far, honestly. I certainly wasn't expecting it to be as well written as it is, and Iris's character isn't at all what I was anticipating either; And yet I absolutely love her. I'm not a netorase fan by any means, but even what you have here so far was ridiculously erotic. I love how the protagonist is separated from the action through the memory orbs, I love how Magnus struggles to dominate the mischievous Iris, and I cannot get enough of how she constantly bends, not breaks, with the pleasure he gives her. A heroine who can keep pace with the antagonist is certainly a refreshing take we don't always see enough of.
And while, usually, I would firmly be in the camp hoping for it all to collapse into netorare, right now I'm more than excited to see just how far you can skim the line between the two genres, especially with the potential for future mystery through Iris, say, 'forgetting' to record her endeavors or such. Either way, I'm eagerly looking forward to more. A few more chapters like these and you might make a netorase fan of me yet! Keep it up!
- January 14th, 2022, 04:13 AM #23692
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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare General Discussion Thread
Henteria Chronicles Chapter 2 - Update 16 (Final) (20$+ ver.)
This is the final update for this game for whomever is interested.
Code:HC2 Update 16 Changelog Misc. -Added a skip button for introduction or prologue (All of Noah’s childhood) -Reworked the tutorial to make it more understandable and easier to the eyes New content -Added the entire True Ending -Added some new content for already existing endings: NTR Ending: -one more scene with Aywin, Celis and Edwyr -one ending sequence Revenge Ending: -short confrontation scene with Aywin and Noah -flashbacks explaining how each girl was added into the harem -one scene with several soldiers, Vaeri, and Dianna (the brunette with the pigtails) -one scene with Noah, Salkia, and Amaria (extra-scene) Happy Ending: -more background on Noah and May's relationship -some more interactions between Thania and her husband -one more scene/mini-quest involving a party, Noah, and several short scenes with different women -one ending sequence
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- January 14th, 2022, 05:08 AM #23693
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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare General Discussion Thread
Your novel doesn't have the glaringly unattractive Western tone that's typical of native English writing. I really like it, I hope you keep it up and complete it one day.
Whether or not it ends up being fully netorase, it's a real shame that the genre is cluttered with incomplete works: "Likes NTR" translated by Isekai NTR anon is an obvious example due to language accessibility, but there are many titles on Syosetu that start great but end up on hiatus...it's a bit more stark than netorare or netori, because the sample size is smaller so percentages are less relevant than absolute numbers.
- January 14th, 2022, 05:50 AM #23694
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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare General Discussion Thread
Ambition is not a dirty word. Piss on compromise. Go for the throat. Write with balls, write with eggs. Sure, it's a harder journey but take it from me, it's well worth it.
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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare General Discussion Thread
THANK YOU FOR SHARING, as always.
I am really gratefull, but during the true ending it gives me a error, maybe because it's the compressed version? it says that a file couldn´t be loaded.
- January 14th, 2022, 01:15 PM #23696
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Re: Anime Sharing - Netorare General Discussion Thread
Already figure it out. It was indeed because of the compressed version, the error was with loading a file called uppertile.jpg. installed the normal version and went out smoothly.
Moving on to a different topic I found the true ending devoided of true development within the main trio. There is nearly no approaching to the subject of the betrayal and the emotional involment of the previous ch. with the antagonist, seems void because it's not resolved non brought into conversation. After seen that they were so deeply entangled with them that Celis even doubted her feelings for Noah when confronting them with the ones for Edwyn the ending seems superfluous and that deprives intensity to the overall feeling of ntr.
A pity because I was quite invested.
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